Brasil poem

Brasil Brasil what a place to be

all the colours and festivity

there’s rich there’s poor

they don’t need no more

the crowds cheer as the icons score

Ronaldo, Ronaldinho, Neymar and Roberto

and there’s heaps more to know

Brasil Brasil what a place to be

with all the colours and festivity

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One Response

  1. antsclass at |

    What a super cool poem Josh!
    It bounces along with a rhythm just like the drums at a great Brasil football match.
    You’ll notice I tweaked it the tiniest bit by adding a couple of line breaks and taking out the first names of the players- can you see how that helps the rhythm keep moving?
    Well done!
    Ant

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